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It looks great on you!
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
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Saturday, 29th November 2008 @ 03:03:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Wrap me tightly,
who needs guts?
squeeze me tighter,
I can still breath.
Dont let go!
I like it like this,
Baby your arms
my greatest memory.
a smile
a sigh of happy breathing.
Oh the joy I get
just from your smile alone.
Keep it their across your cheeks baby.
It looks great on you!
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2008-11-29 03:03:54]
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Re: It looks great on you!
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 29th November 2008 @ 05:35:21 AM AEST
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Wow, this is so refreshing to read.
Luv it from beginning to end.
It grabs just like the feather does in Forrest Gump, (my favorite movie).
Awesome writing.
Very tender and touching.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: It looks great on you!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th November 2008 @ 10:46:36 PM AEST
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This is an adorable write. A very innocent and joyous side of love and admiration. Well done, indeed.
BRAVO!
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Re: It looks great on you!
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 10:47:13 PM AEST
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so sweet, a wonderful write!
hugs n' love nessa |
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