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Why........(deppresion)

Contributed by poetking123 on Saturday, 29th November 2008 @ 12:24:05 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



no ones my friend i tried to talk to some girls but they all just laughed and left. why am i so ugly
why does every one think I'm disgusting .Am i really that stupid as to think that on day a guy will see me and the get struck by cupid.? Am i really that worthless and poor that my parents can't even get me a pretty dress or stop my brothers from playing with some pennies on a game of chess.Why am i so dirt poor not even my real father will come and knock on my door.Well no more! No games i picked up the gun and put to my brain.bye mom, little brother ,and step dad i will miss you but in hell you would to. I can't take this life is nothing but criticism in this cruel world so i shot my self and fell like a block of wood.................but didn't think of my family and that's what makes life good...........................




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Re: Why........(deppresion) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 29th November 2008 @ 01:08:20 AM AEST
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Well, I certainly hope that's this is just letting off steam.
I can't really imagene what makes you feel so sad. My children and grand children are my life.
I can relate to being down on life. Once I changed my negative thinking and got out of myself, I found joy unspeakable.
Please just take it easy on yourself.
I'm so sorry you feel this way. I take meds that help me deal with things.
Take care and I'll be your friend.
Big huggs, peace, joy, luv,
emy


Re: Why........(deppresion) (User Rating: 1 )
by snoopington on Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 08:30:35 AM AEST
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very emotional i felt like this not so long ago myself and i start writing and i really think it helps you have a talent use it and keep writing.

cant wait to hear more from you.
all the best.

m.........




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