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The morning after
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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And as fire fell from heaven
to lighten up the skies
to show the scene before us
as we hear the horried cries
of a hundred thousand screams
of the dying and the dead
who stand before the path
of destruction we've been lead
and the terror that's been cast
like a shadow on the wall
as we watch once again
how the mighty they do fall
and at last we bow our heads
to know we are to blame
for the causes of our action
and to show the world our shame
Copyright ©
wordsy
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2003-03-21 07:35:00]
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Re: The morning after
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 09:45:33 AM AEST
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AAHH I liked this so very well put into words!
A great peice! Christina |
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Re: The morning after
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by avemaria on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 10:47:32 AM AEST
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I really liked the diction that you used. It was a pretty good poem. Maybe you can lengthen it a little.
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Re: The morning after
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 02:09:22 PM AEST
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as always well said
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Re: The morning after
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 09:52:27 AM AEST
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Great poem!! We should be ashamed of the way we act sometimes.
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Re: The morning after
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 10:02:41 PM AEST
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know what your saying
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