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Without You
Contributed by
lnnie
on
Thursday, 27th November 2008 @ 08:16:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I will not be able to write
without you;
There will be no new lines
or ideas;
until
I hear in my mind
you breathing;
hear two hearts beating
above this page.
Even this
next word
isn't real
unless I envision
that it will
by you read;
that it will be felt
by you too.
Any eager beginning
is meaningless
unless
you sit with me here.
I move my chair now;
as evening comes
to better see
what to write;
This phrase too
and the next one or two
awaits my imagining
you'll see the words flow here.
I can't say when the words
will come;
they'll surprise;
but I am very clear
who they are for,
and they will sail
across this paper
buffeted by the gentle breeze
of we two breathing;
hearts beating.
Nothing happens
unless I feel
you share it too.
Dear Reader
I feel you.
and more.
Copyright ©
lnnie
... [
2008-11-27 20:16:59]
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Re: Without You
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by elle on
Thursday, 27th November 2008 @ 10:42:14 PM AEST
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| what wonderful sharing. . . thank you. elle |
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Re: Without You
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by sbs on
Friday, 28th November 2008 @ 12:52:44 AM AEST
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wow that was so great
i didn't expect the ending...
but you really did a great job here
so thank you 4 sharing this |
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