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Hatred Redeems

Contributed by liamleash on Thursday, 27th November 2008 @ 04:38:56 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

The pain behind these eyes , as i sit and wait.
Wait for fate to come and sort me out.
Turn my life around, and give me some good karma.
A thousand words but only one way to say sorry.
Being a nobody under the spotlight burns.
The way things they come and go.
They change the way life flows.
I'll start right where we'll begin.
Before i messed everything up and the pain set in.

Nothing i do can change what i do,
so ill look around.
Catch your empty glance.
And continue to bleed between the lines.
Like being alive is now a crime.
Dark and deep but no end of this road can i reach.
Self destructive routes only can end in one way.
But i cant see this road.
Im trying to change, be a new person.
Get rid of the weight that lies on my shoulders

I've realised for a flower to grow.
The roots have to hit the floor.
But they dont grow alone.
Needing help they reach to the sun.
To be turned away and burn in the dark.
But im not asking for help,
Love of a good woman or even a shoulder to cry on.
Being hated drives me to break the mould.
And i'll keep doing that.

Copyright © liamleash ... [ 2008-11-27 16:38:56]
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Re: Hatred Redeems (User Rating: 1 )
by sbs on Friday, 28th November 2008 @ 01:14:54 AM AEST
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outch that was really anger!
hope you're feeling well now :D
i really enjoyed the words and the themes here
you did a great writing...I liked it alot
thank you

Sarah

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