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The Last Time
Contributed by
courtseb
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Thursday, 27th November 2008 @ 10:55:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I give you a hug and a kiss goodbye,
hold your hand tight with a tear in my eye.
I say not a word, but I know it in my heart,
that this is the last time, before you depart.
I let your hand go and say a short prayer,
knowing where ever we go you'll always be there.
I turn once more and see your sweet face,
and run right back for one last embrace,
and not long after, you won your race.
Dedicated to: Great Uncle Jerry
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courtseb
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2008-11-27 10:55:50]
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Re: The Last Time
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by Loende on
Thursday, 27th November 2008 @ 02:44:20 PM AEST
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And a lovely farewell it is. A touching write.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: The Last Time
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 27th November 2008 @ 03:22:54 PM AEST
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I can truly identify with this....over and over....
Well done....
I am sorry for your loss...
Jenni |
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Re: The Last Time
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 05:40:07 PM AEST
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A fitting and poignant tribute.
It is always hard to say goodbye but even harder when you know you will never again say it to that person.
Touching
Steve |
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Re: The Last Time
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 21st August 2010 @ 09:09:11 AM AEST
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| I felt the combination of braveness and sadness in this and the overall importance of saying that goodbye very moving write |
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