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Love Strokes
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
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Wednesday, 26th November 2008 @ 10:56:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I draw the stars
Into a mountain
i brush the sea
into a tree
I take the moon
from the sky
plant it deep
beneath the sea
I take the planets
coloring them to style
gathering them
under the rainbow sky
Ill paint myself
firmly on the ground
poppy field is where will meet
under the sky where my love is...
Copyright ©
eternalsunshine
... [
2008-11-26 22:56:45]
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Re: Love Strokes
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by razorbladekisses on
Friday, 28th November 2008 @ 12:36:35 PM AEST
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Hm, I can't place it exactly, but there's something about this poem. I really like this.
Hope to see more work from you.
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Re: Love Strokes
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by emystar on
Saturday, 29th November 2008 @ 11:23:15 PM AEST
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This is heaven on Earth, incredible writing.
Breathe taking.
Thanks for the trip.
Huggs, smiles, blessing,
emy |
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Re: Love Strokes
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by lnnie on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 05:23:34 PM AEST
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Well it is lyrical loveliness. So,,,, well done.
I was taken away and liked it!
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