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Thornless Roses
Contributed by
lnnie
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Wednesday, 26th November 2008 @ 03:29:17 PM in AEST
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You strip the thorns from all my roses;
they preen themselves
in the soul dust
from your eyes.
The brook in my heart
plumb your depths
and rush down
the waterfall
to swirling
rapids below,
tracing the path
to our
Spiritual Sea;
settling there
in the peace
Thorn-Less Roses bring.
There among the sediments
layered over these years
are our hopes;
our dreams;
the children who lay down
to dream each night,
as we once dreamed,
of pretty roses
and deep blue seas.
Copyright ©
lnnie
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2008-11-26 15:29:17]
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Re: Thornless Roses
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 26th November 2008 @ 05:54:27 PM AEST
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You capture such feeling in your poetry. You are a delight to read, much talent here.
Michelle
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Re: Thornless Roses
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th November 2008 @ 01:11:34 AM AEST
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Very passionate and deeply romantic. I really love the metaphors you chose here. There is a real burning fire of all that is being said. You accomplished taking the passion to a poetic level without being overly dramatic! Really well done!
BRAVO!
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