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Sonnet 1
Contributed by
ktbugg
on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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His presence shines brighter than the sun
The light, which my eyes doth betake
Brings life to lifeless flowers as none
Their pride, each one, they forsake
His beauty disperses through the sky
Gratifying all within its presence
Challenging the adherent to defy
Gifting the dull a near effervescence
His life brings about strong desire
To which the heart longs to fulfill
For he, all my virtue flames in fire
My heart, with thine eyes, he shall kill
In this: all the intelligent trickery played on mine eyes
Gifts me great pleasure, and molds my despise
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Re: Sonnet 1
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by venkat on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 05:18:02 AM AEST
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| a good write. very nice to read. venkat |
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Re: Sonnet 1
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 02:16:26 PM AEST
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good write very enjoyable
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Re: Sonnet 1
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 08:53:42 PM AEST
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very interesting I enjoyed this a great reprieve from all the poems for or against the war.
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