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Look You In The Eye
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
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I won't look away,
Though your pain is here to stay,
I will remember this day.
And you might not see,
How much it hurts me,
To let you be set free.
The unspoken thoughts
~and there would be lots~
Would sit in my brain and rot.
I will look you in the eye,
To witness your goodbye.
But know that I will cry.
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2003-03-21 04:35:00]
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Re: Look You In The Eye
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by LadyDama on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 05:13:26 AM AEST
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| deep and full of emotion... excellent poem... i hope "son" sees this... blessings... |
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Re: Look You In The Eye
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 12:12:27 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem.
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Re: Look You In The Eye
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 02:18:10 PM AEST
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very well written beautiful poem
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Re: Look You In The Eye
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by EyesRustedShut on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 11:48:59 PM AEST
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| Very Nice.... If you like good music and you have some extra time check out the music of Monday In London at www.mondayinlondon.com |
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Re: Look You In The Eye
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by SuicidalSon on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 10:19:08 AM AEST
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An extreme thank you is needed for this Ive never had anyone write something about me
before I love this it makes me want to cry and as for the end where you say you might not cry
I wouldnt want you to If I were to take my own life everyone should party because that is my dream once again thank you
SS is JF |
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