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My Final Sunrise
Contributed by
jcvamp
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Monday, 24th November 2008 @ 09:07:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The sun crowns on the horizon
Scattered rays ignite the sky
The golden halo of the morning
Awakes the world, but here I lie
Pastel orange, pink and purple
Streak the canvas atmosphere
A majestic wonder spread before me
But my time is drawing near
This will be my final sunrise
A shimmering dawn for my demise
The songbirds call to greet the morning
And sing me one last lullaby.
Copyright ©
jcvamp
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2008-11-24 09:07:31]
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Re: My Final Sunrise
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by ki on
Monday, 24th November 2008 @ 03:13:13 PM AEST
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| i enjoyed reading this..nice work |
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Re: My Final Sunrise
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by Loende on
Monday, 24th November 2008 @ 06:39:55 PM AEST
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I sometimes think that it's the more bleak side of us is what really drives the best expression. This is a great little write that shows both the bright and dark. I'm not sure if this is a literal write for you, but having faced a few near-death moments, it was a literal read for me. Lyrical choices that have painted vivid imagery. Great job.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: My Final Sunrise
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 27th November 2008 @ 02:53:09 PM AEST
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The metaphors used here were lovely....they gave me such a feeling of tranquillity...until I came to the last line....then I felt sad... Hope this is just a beautiful write from you...
Jenni |
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