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Thoughts Of You
Contributed by
navydocny
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Monday, 24th November 2008 @ 05:33:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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What dost thou see when thinking of me?
Are there thoughts of splendor or those bitter?
Feelings that are wallow, if not repartee
Surely thy quest is amongst thy mind’s litter
Once my love for thee was all in thy mind’s eye
Our unyielding love’s warmth comforting our bed
None as revered as to be thy flanking ally
Distant from the world’s cold darkest of dread
Can we reclaim each other’s trust, confidence or love?
Will we allow divergence to douse what flame is left?
Just as the rains of disparity have washed us from above
Most assuredly we can find each other awash of bereft
A bonfire of continence, our life for many a year
We can reawaken to light this unfruitful frontier
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th November 2008 @ 05:02:21 PM AEST
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Hello, my friend,
Hope all is well with you in Bagdad. Stay safe, friend.
Very good writing as always.
I'll keep you and her in my daily prayers.
Huggs, blessings, safety,
emy |
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by Loende on
Monday, 24th November 2008 @ 06:45:41 PM AEST
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Love lost and longed for...*sigh* I feel you. You really have a beautiful way of putting words and emotions together to paint a lovely picture. I too will keep you and your love fair in my prayers. Please stay strong and safe.
Be well, and as always...thank you.
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by lnnie on
Thursday, 4th December 2008 @ 11:04:44 PM AEST
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Will we allow divergence to douse what flame is left?
Just as the rains of disparity have washed us from above
Most assuredly we can find each other awash of bereft
A bonfire of continence, our life for many a year
We can reawaken to light this unfruitful frontier
What lies in these words is pure talent.
Great great stuff.
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Re: Thoughts Of You
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by ItsMeNow on
Wednesday, 11th February 2009 @ 11:17:01 AM AEST
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| I really like this. It is a great poem and an equally great display of your talent. |
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