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moment in bliss
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
on
Sunday, 23rd November 2008 @ 02:39:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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my eyes wonder around
lost in gaze
the crowed is engaged
passing the moments away
I'm still there
while everyone's away
I'm captured by the moment
i hold it dear
I'm starting to open
while everyone's at freeze
you stare at me
while i blush away
no one is aware
as our eyes interlock
the moment of spark
captured in bliss
you move closer
feeling my pain
you slowly lift you hand
placing it on my sleeve
I'm falling deeper
into your eyes
like rainbow
it shines
you kiss me
i don't know why
but it's all so great
to waste it for now
no one seems to matter now
just you and me
captured in a moment
of bliss....
Copyright ©
eternalsunshine
... [
2008-11-23 02:39:00]
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Re: moment in bliss
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by lnnie on
Sunday, 23rd November 2008 @ 03:30:49 PM AEST
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Captured indeed;
"Beauty-eyed
transfixed there
frozen gazed.
You see and not see
blinded by the blissful
care
a touch brings."
Inspired me.
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Re: moment in bliss
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th November 2008 @ 05:59:48 PM AEST
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This is beautifull and very romantic.
Awesome work, my friend.
Big huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy
May the bliss never end. |
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