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She Looked So Good In Red
Contributed by
Karlee14
on
Saturday, 22nd November 2008 @ 09:22:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I Watched Her Fade To Dust
And Leave Me Behind
The Very Scent Of Her
Would Bring You To Your Knees.
I Watched Her Turn To Nothing
Inside Her Eyes
Heart Breaking
Love Forsaking.
I Watched Her Fall From Grace
Skin So Soft
And Words So Dense
I Heard Her Say Goodbye
I Watched Her Slit Her Throat
The Blood Pouring From Her Sweet Neck
Staining Her Pale Skin
She Looked So Good In Red.
I Watched Her Turn To Nothing...
Copyright ©
Karlee14
... [
2008-11-22 21:22:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: She Looked So Good In Red
(User Rating: 1 ) by Drapes on
Saturday, 2nd January 2010 @ 04:42:53 PM AEST (User
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I like this. The word choice creates an image. It's short but dark and deep. The repetition is good and I love the last line! |
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