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I'm 17
Contributed by
juliestevens18
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Saturday, 22nd November 2008 @ 05:44:41 PM in AEST
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Your eyes fall short of breath-taking
Your eyes they tell all
The smile upon your lips
Makes my heart get very small
You aren't average
You leak pain
When I see a crowd
All I can think about is your name
You catch my by surprise
And I cry inside
When you tell me of your secrets
I want to die and hide
WIthout your touch I feel empty
Without your smile I feel weak
Without your breath I am alone
I feel so "tongue in cheek"
At school I am forgotten
A long lost memory
A girl who has lost so much
A girl whose seventeen
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Re: I'm 17
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by snoopington on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 09:27:04 AM AEST
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great write love your flow hope to hear more from ya.
all the best.
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Re: I'm 17
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 05:30:07 PM AEST
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I think I can just about remember 17 but what I do remember was that it was always a time of doubt and anguish.
Come to think of it, it hasn't got a huge amount better now im older !!
Good work
Steve |
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