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Again
Contributed by
Loende
on
Thursday, 20th November 2008 @ 10:06:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It’s a thin line between love and hate
Where it’s neither deep nor wide
Somewhere you’ve been before,
But never want to live again.
It’s a thin line between hot and cold
Where it’s neither fair nor foul
Somehow you’ve been before
But never want to stay again.
It’s a thin line between lust and pain
Where it’s neither bright nor dim
Someone you’ve been before
But never want to be again.
It’s a thin line between young and old
Where it’s neither fast nor slow
Somewhat you’ve been before
But never want to sense again.
It’s a thin line between good and bad
Where it’s neither black nor white
Something you’ve been before
But never want do again.
Copyright ©
Loende
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2008-11-20 22:06:58]
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Re: Again
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by emystar on
Thursday, 20th November 2008 @ 10:40:23 PM AEST
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So, so true.
Good work, my friend.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Again
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd November 2008 @ 02:56:57 AM AEST
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A very excellent write. I really like the analgoies about life and the inherent confusion thereof. Nicely done.
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Re: Again
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Tuesday, 25th November 2008 @ 07:40:45 AM AEST
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| i like this, it's very thought-provoking. good stuff! |
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Re: Again
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 09:42:55 AM AEST
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Wow hun, this poem just reeks of regret. (one of the most horrible
words in the English language, IMHO). Reflection isn't always easy, but
you've accepted the task with much conviction and sagely thoughts. The last
verse is impeccable in its emotion and secrets. Your work is always so full.
Exceptional!
~ Breezy
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