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Confessions Of A Lonely Barfly
Contributed by
jesusofholland
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Thursday, 20th November 2008 @ 12:28:41 AM in AEST
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Re: Confessions Of A Lonely Barfly
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cathi on
Thursday, 20th November 2008 @ 01:22:43 AM AEST (User
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What an excellent confession! I love the suprise ending and the sheer agony of not being able to ask for what you really want. The tone of the poem also indicates the appearance of the 'fly's' attitude until the breakdown in the end. |
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