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Tears of Blood (Friday, November 23)
Contributed by
Blue
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Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 01:45:00 AM in AEST
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crying tears of blood,
it's an outcry of a naked soul
bleeding heart opened wide
on the mattress of the bed at the children's home
would anyone know where I had gone
would anyone care if I just died
i lay bleeding from the eyes
like a case of ebola
chaos running through my veins
wanting to spill from my wrists
along with precious blood
it didn't mater then
it doesn't matter now.
I can't win, I can't win I thought
defeated I got in the car and came home.
I sobbed broken tears of faint blood....
I bit my lip until the tears came
and my saliva seemed to me like blood
thick inside my throat
I tasted the tears from my lover's eyes
they seemed to me to be of blood
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Re: Tears of Blood (Friday, November 23)
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by LadyDama on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 03:29:29 AM AEST
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| yes, i shall admit it... my favorite poetry to read is darker poetry... this is a gem... excellent imagery... blessings... |
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Re: Tears of Blood (Friday, November 23)
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by tease_whizz on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 04:23:37 AM AEST
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| love it - dark, powerful and full of raw emotion. excellent write, keep them coming, Kate x |
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Re: Tears of Blood (Friday, November 23)
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 10:11:26 AM AEST
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Brilliant - such raw emotion. Keep it coming!!
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Re: Tears of Blood (Friday, November 23)
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 02:42:41 PM AEST
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very emotional good write i don't normally like the darker poetry but this is very good
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Re: Tears of Blood (Friday, November 23)
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 03:56:15 PM AEST
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| this is absolutely amazing... |
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Re: Tears of Blood (Friday, November 23)
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 02:55:38 AM AEST
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this spells talent and I am glad that u liked it needless to say this is one of the best pieces I've read in a long time (yours or anyone elses)
i lay bleeding from the eyes
like a case of ebola
that line made me shiver...
Bobo (Joel) |
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