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I simply can't go on.
Contributed by
AchingSoul
on
Wednesday, 19th November 2008 @ 02:13:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can't help you anymore.
My heart is sick...
I'm too weak.
Enough!
It has got to stop,
I can hardly even stand up.
My head is spinning,
My heart is bleeding.
It's time I let you go,
It's time I give you up.
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2008-11-19 14:13:24]
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Re: I simply can't go on.
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 19th November 2008 @ 04:52:54 PM AEST
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Sad but I can relate.
good work.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: I simply can't go on.
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by alexischeyenne on
Wednesday, 19th November 2008 @ 06:20:42 PM AEST
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Short, but very to the point.
I like it, even though it was depressing. |
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Re: I simply can't go on.
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by breathofrane on
Wednesday, 19th November 2008 @ 06:22:06 PM AEST
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| Some people are very draining, not just emotionally, but it's like they are trying to drain your soul. I can definitely relate. |
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