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Gratitude
Contributed by
Adam
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Wednesday, 19th November 2008 @ 01:17:51 AM in AEST
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Grateful is a switchblade pressed,
Taut,
Across the throat of happiness,
Forceful but useful.
Accordingly happiness,
Reacts-
Benignly yet determined,
Smells-
Better than rum,
Feels-
Smaller than special,
But......
Is gregariously worthwhile,
If short lived, and handicapped.
Copyright ©
Adam
... [
2008-11-19 01:17:51]
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Re: Gratitude
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th November 2008 @ 02:33:09 PM AEST
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You have a tremendous poetic flare! The way you choose to express yourself and the descriptions you use to do this are fascinating. I am enjoying your work.
BRAVO!
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Re: Gratitude
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by emystar on
Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 11:20:57 PM AEST
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Really good writing.
huggs, blessings,
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Re: Gratitude
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by luzerro on
Wednesday, 27th January 2010 @ 08:16:50 AM AEST
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| i like your poem. its so different.=] different is good. |
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