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~Vinya Yesta~ New Beginning
Contributed by
muinanyere
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Tuesday, 18th November 2008 @ 11:15:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Leaves cover the ground
As twisted branches reach towards the heavens
And clouds are trailing off
A little happiness has come at last
I feel joy today
It is a new beginning
A new path
It feels right for once
Lassi tope i talan
Ve nauca olva rahta ana i ilwe
Ar fanyar nar ausora
I titta alasse tul se telda
Felmenye alasse sira
Nas I vinya yesta
I vinya tie
Felmes tera an nea
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2008-11-18 23:15:43]
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Re: ~Vinya Yesta~ New Beginning
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 19th November 2008 @ 01:04:27 PM AEST
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It's great to see a rose among so many thorns, at last.. this is a lovely and positive poem.... enjoyed this very much...
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Re: ~Vinya Yesta~ New Beginning
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th November 2008 @ 02:37:00 PM AEST
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A wonderful opening description (perfectly imagined and penned) giving us a proper setting for a short and beautiful poem that leaves us with a smile. Brilliantly crafted!
BRAVO!
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