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Liquidity
Contributed by
Adam
on
Monday, 17th November 2008 @ 11:40:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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On Its side and leaking,
Words of promise.
Words-
Doused in whimsy of experience,
Of ingredients,
Not technique.
Words-
Benightedly soused in,
Beautiful,
Terrified belief.
Words-
Throttled then,
Laundered with,
Uneducated,
Canonised,
Intent.
Copyright ©
Adam
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2008-11-17 23:40:29]
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Re: Liquidity
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 18th November 2008 @ 12:39:58 AM AEST
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I will not argue with these very powefull words.
Great job.
Huggs,
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Re: Liquidity
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th November 2008 @ 01:42:19 AM AEST
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Short to the point and absolutely powerful. Your message here is strong and well taken by this poet. This was woven masterfully with such little context (by word count) but the enormity of your thoughts here is superb!
BRAVO!
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