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Who is to blame?

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Monday, 17th November 2008 @ 05:48:03 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Who's to blame?
for me going insane
Is it the questions in my mind
That I can't find the answer and have ran out of time
or is it the people who cause me pain
Are they the ones making this insanity come down like rain
Who's to blame?
Is it me or is it you
Either way I want it to be through
I've gone out of my mind
I don't know what else to say
Only that I still don't know who to blame
I think that I know
I just don't want it to show
I have no one to blame but myself

Copyright © Voice of the Silent ... [ 2008-11-17 17:48:03]
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Re: Who is to blame? (User Rating: 1 )
by gmcse8 on Wednesday, 19th November 2008 @ 02:52:54 PM AEST
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I liked your poem. It had some nice elements like the repition of the word blame, I thought worked nicely. Some of the phrasing was well done also. The sixth line especially I went back and read a few times, it has some very nice wording. I don't know if you are writing from personal experience or not, but if you are, you might want to check out some of the poems by little_genna. She has been through some very rough spots and has used her poetry as therapy of sorts. Anyway, keep writing, you have something to say.

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