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Give up or keep going...?
Contributed by
AchingSoul
on
Monday, 17th November 2008 @ 06:13:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Woke up and found myself here,
My eyes filled with fear.
Walking down this road again-
This time there's no one here to hold my hand.
This route will soon split in two,
One way would lead me to destruction,
And the other - would lead me back to you.
Shadows are crawling,
Tears are falling,
The voices in my head turned to shouts,and they're calling-
Calling for me to head their way...
....I think the day I die might be today.
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AchingSoul
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2008-11-17 06:13:57]
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Re: Give up or keep going...?
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by tres_estrellas on
Monday, 17th November 2008 @ 06:30:04 AM AEST
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| I really liked it. Wish it were a bit longer though :) |
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Re: Give up or keep going...?
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by Eireannach on
Monday, 17th November 2008 @ 09:17:26 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful... flows very well! |
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Re: Give up or keep going...?
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by kitt on
Tuesday, 18th November 2008 @ 03:07:13 AM AEST
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I think its a good one.
i think its perfect the way it is. |
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