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Absolute Sky
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Saturday, 15th November 2008 @ 03:44:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Once, as a child, I drew the first absolute sky that I had ever seen.
It was a simple, undiluted blue—a parapet of casual brawny blue—dressed lavishly, and crowned with a dash of golden streaks breaching the edge of a tumbling mountain.
Against that sky, my eyes are blind.
I see a dream, a river drawn at the edge of heaven—golden tears to wash the face of heaven—running course across the eyes of angels, sparkling silver at the mouth of God.
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Re: Absolute Sky
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by Loende on
Saturday, 15th November 2008 @ 09:28:06 PM AEST
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Gosh, I love this. Small blurb, but big impact. It's so...vivid.
"Sparkling silver at the mouth of God"
*sigh*
Great job!!
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: Absolute Sky
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by Shade on
Wednesday, 19th November 2008 @ 10:41:17 PM AEST
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| You had me right from the first line. Amazing work. |
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