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Perfect Vains
Contributed by
smrtypnts93
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Friday, 14th November 2008 @ 03:08:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Perfect vains, ready to be sliced open. Can't decide, however, what tool to use. A knife, razor blade, maybe anything sharp will do.
Perfect vains, saying 'hurry up and bleed me out." Can't decide, however, what's stopping me. The fear, the pain, or maybe nothing at all.
Perfect vains, will have to wait until another day. Can't decide, however, when that day will be. Could be tomorrow, next week, or maybe never.
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Re: Perfect Vains
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th November 2008 @ 11:12:07 AM AEST
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Well the fact that you are cutting and slicing the vanity within yourself is an amazingly poetic metaphor. I love the way you replaced the word vein with vain. This is damn poetic.
Slice open that vanity. Slice, slice, slice. Cut, cut, cut. Oh the darkness!
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Re: Perfect Vains
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by Tiffyo4 on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 10:11:35 PM AEST
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| i know what you are going through in this poem. i have had the same problem for years. but very nice write. |
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