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Rain
Contributed by
karoody
on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Let the rain come down in our eyes-
For everything we see
Is now a memory
Of all that used to be.
Let the rain come down in our eyes-
For everything we love
Is like a little dove
Flying too far above.
Let the rain come down in our eyes-
For everything we built
Is reduced to guilt
As it's covered in filth.
Let the rain come down in our eyes-
And wash it all away
So that maybe one day
Our children can all play.
Copyright ©
karoody
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2003-03-20 23:45:00]
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Re: Rain
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 11:59:11 PM AEST
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This is sad.... but very beautiful...
I especially love the ending... look to the brighter side.... but this is a really really beautiful poem...
YS |
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Re: Rain
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by venkat on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 12:56:03 AM AEST
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| you Girl, why don't you turn into water and flow away along with rain water, ha, there is some thought flow in this poem. good read. venkat |
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Re: Rain
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by LadyDama on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 03:32:32 AM AEST
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| encouraging and precious write... yes, let us wash the filth away, so our children can play another day... blessings... |
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Re: Rain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 03:59:31 AM AEST
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Something really warming about this poem. Saying that life can be hard but we are optimistic that we can make it better. Really lovely poem.
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Re: Rain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 12:00:10 PM AEST
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The rain becomes a baptism of such.
Beatifully expressed!!!
Angel always....Godspeed!!! 0:-) |
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Re: Rain
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 12:29:02 PM AEST
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I love this poem!! Living in the desert the patter of rain is a treat too me. Yes rain as tears are cleansing. Let the rain come!! Such a ray of hope with this poem. Nice!!
Michelle |
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Re: Rain
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by wolfflow on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 03:47:38 PM AEST
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| there is a beautiful love in this poem, and a beautiful hope, may your beauty shine on |
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Re: Rain
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 04:54:34 PM AEST
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| Simple beautiful thoght ,sweetly and innocently expressed. Qute a sting in the tail though. Good poem. |
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Re: Rain
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by kolbrun on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 05:57:54 AM AEST
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This poem is very well written and very passionate I really love it! well take care and much love to ya
yours Kolbrún |
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Re: Rain
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 10:18:37 PM AEST
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| wow ... its so amazing the other day i was tryin to write something just like this... i just couldn't get this down on paper though... nicely done kara maybe my writers block was because something in me wanted you to write my thoughts down... wierd huh |
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Re: Rain
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by wazarov on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 10:46:05 PM AEST
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| honestly and truely i was shocked by the way this poem was composed, it is my duty as a reader to bow to your talent.. highly beautiful |
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