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Full Moon Tonight
Contributed by
outlawpoet
on
Thursday, 13th November 2008 @ 07:36:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It's a full moon tonight
A full moon tonight
I am sleeping in a pine box
No im not dead just waiting on the day
The angel of death comes to call me home
Cause dying is better than living alone
It's a full moon tonight
A full moon tonight
And im standing oer my grave
Oer my grave
No im not dying
Just tired so tired of living
So whats the use in trying
Im alone!
It's a full moon tonight
A full moon tonight
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2008-11-13 19:36:05]
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Re: Full Moon Tonight
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 14th November 2008 @ 08:15:38 PM AEST
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Great write
sorry you think this though
no one is ever alone no matter how much they think it they always have someone
Like they say dyings easy living hard
no sense in dropping out now
again great write the new style works for you
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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Re: Full Moon Tonight
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th February 2009 @ 03:30:27 AM AEST
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Well, it's definitely sad. :-( I am not sure I completely understand it but I like the flow. Sounds like it'd make a cool little song.
Take care,
Tim |
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