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~Confessions Of A Drug Addict~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Thursday, 13th November 2008 @ 02:42:28 PM in AEST
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~~^~~
Late one night, needing a fix,
I decided to 'put down a job',
Found myself in an affluent home,
Away from the city mob.
Got inside the house quite easily,
Cause I am quite small and agile.
Take what I want and get out real quick,
That was my usual style.
That night I got quite greedy
And felt I could take more stuff.
I foolishly turned on one of the lights-
That's when things started to get rough!
Not long after I heard a car
As it pulled up close to the house.
I crept to the window to have a peek,
Then I kept as quiet as a mouse.
A neighbor had seen the light go on,
And the police she did call.
I knew I wouldn't have time to climb
Through the window and over the wall.
The Police they had the house surrounded,
I knew I didn't stand a chance,
Still I thought of making an escape,
So to the window I did advance.
A cop saw me and decided to play,
Told me to make a run for it.
That way when he put a bullet in my head,
The law will deem it legit!
I looked at him and smiled to myself.
And we both knew he was right.
Even though I was very tempted,
I wasn't ready to die tonight!!
~~^~~
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Jenni_K
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Re: ~Confessions Of A Drug Addict~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th November 2008 @ 03:07:39 AM AEST
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Okay, I'm thinking this may be about a student you once knew??? or know??? It's definitely not about our sweet and innocent teacher. :P No way!!!
What a wonderful little story you have written in poetic verse. Very nice, Jenni!!!! I like it.
Tim
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Re: ~Confessions Of A Drug Addict~
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 14th November 2008 @ 05:43:42 AM AEST
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lol....Thanks Tim,.. For one thing I am not small nor agile..so it can't be me.. Unfortunately, it is about my brother..something he once told us...
What if it WAS me?? lol
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Re: ~Confessions Of A Drug Addict~
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 14th November 2008 @ 08:44:02 AM AEST
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Jenni,
Great write. Sad situation though. A wise choice on his part.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Confessions Of A Drug Addict~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th November 2008 @ 11:45:02 AM AEST
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MmmmHmmmmm picking up a bit of cash in your spare time Jenni?
LOL Great story! |
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Re: ~Confessions Of A Drug Addict~
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 18th November 2008 @ 02:32:27 AM AEST
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Jen, I was thinking of your bro when I read this.
This is a very powerfull write.
It just might save someone elses life.
Huggs, blessings, luv,
emy |
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Re: ~Confessions Of A Drug Addict~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th November 2008 @ 03:07:52 PM AEST
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A great story which had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. I have known many drug addicts in my life time and only by God's grace am I not one. I certainly did enough in my day to become one.
A compelling tale and wonderful woven!
BRAVO!
SCM
P.S. Stay off the drugs, lol |
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Re: ~Confessions Of A Drug Addict~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th November 2008 @ 09:08:53 PM AEST
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| This poem hd excellent rhythym and was well written! |
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