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BROKEN
Contributed by
robert_edgar_burns
on
Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 06:27:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I understand, I'm not the man
To make your dreams come true.
I wait in vain, can't hide the pain,
Expecting to hear from you.
All day alone, I wait by the phone,
To get your promised call.
Your feminine voice, leaves me no choice
But to wait until you do!
Fighting back tears, it seems like years
Since you soothed me with your words.
And Oh your smile, it drives me wild,
As I wrap around your fingers.
Promise no more, just close the door
If I have become a pest.
For I now feel that I am a heel,
To think that you'd love me too!
By: Robert Edgar Lawdog Burns
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robert_edgar_burns
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2008-11-12 18:27:16]
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Re: BROKEN
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 13th November 2008 @ 02:55:14 PM AEST
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Feeling the pain in this....
Loved your rhyme scheme....
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Re: BROKEN
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th April 2010 @ 12:49:47 AM AEST
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Wo this is so sad but like always it just reaches out and grabs my inner being.
huggs, blessings,
ur#1 fan |
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