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Questions?
Contributed by
shelby
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Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 12:27:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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What if we didn't believe in war?
Would peace be spread wide and far?
What if we didn't believe in hate?
love everywhere, no reason to tempt fate.
What if we didn't believe in strife?
No worries for all and a good life.
What if we didn't believe in greed?
People would no longer want or need.
What if we didn't believe in fancy belonging?
There would be no need, want or longing.
What if we didn't believe in the lie?
Would the sting of reality make us cry????????
WHAT IF???????????????
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shelby
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2008-11-12 00:27:22]
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Re: Questions?
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by MaRyDoNtUwAnNa on
Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 12:41:50 AM AEST
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| Good flow, nice questions. Life would be alot easier if it really was this way. |
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Re: Questions?
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by lilmissy on
Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 12:49:40 AM AEST
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| HIPPIE! lol jk jk jk jk jk :) i really like this one, it makes sense and it's catchy...niiiceeee |
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Re: Questions?
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 01:59:00 AM AEST
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A lovely blend of rare artistry
between you two, i like this
concept, beautiful as always
shel, a splendid colaboration
between you gary . . .
Ben . . . |
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Re: Questions?
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 06:08:21 PM AEST
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some very good question
Shari |
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by breezyweezy on
Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 07:52:33 PM AEST
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GOOD WRITE! i loved it! nice flow
bree |
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Re: Questions?
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 09:16:07 PM AEST
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Well done, you two...
What if we knew the answers to all of life's questions......
Hugs
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Re: Questions?
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by Recyclebin on
Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 10:50:47 PM AEST
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????? All I can say is ..... nice flow. I really liked this, it had a strong meaning behind it.
love these kind of poems.
;o)
~Bin~
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