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Don't wanna
Contributed by
Jlokitty
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Tuesday, 11th November 2008 @ 09:36:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I don't wanna be a little girl
Struggling in this sad,sad world
Grasping for a hand
People rejecting it away
Looking for some help
Turning me back
Betrayal
Injustice
It just isn't right.
Misunderstandings,
Cruelty,
Unhapiness
There's no escape
From this world of hurt.
So i'll just lie here
And pass away.
Copyright ©
Jlokitty
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2008-11-11 21:36:25]
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Re: Don't wanna
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by spyndl on
Tuesday, 11th November 2008 @ 11:42:32 PM AEST
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| Welcome to a thing called life. But don't focus on the ugliness, look for those few bright moments of joy, kindness and love. For that is what makes life worth living. |
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Re: Don't wanna
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 06:12:22 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel. I often feel this way about the cold world. Great poem! |
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Re: Don't wanna
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 25th November 2008 @ 08:15:14 PM AEST
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Wonderful write, though very sad... but like spyndl said, welcome to life!! Focus on the happy moments, however rare they may be... and enjoy it....
Take care..
Jenni |
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