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13 Words . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Tuesday, 11th November 2008 @ 12:01:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I
just simply love you
so unconditionally,
amidst the sunset
of our life we fit
so
naturally.
You
make me glad
that i was born
and that i am
a
man,
that in your heart
i was a part
of what was in your
plan.
You make me glad
that i was young
with all the things
we
did,
and though i'm old
when i'm with you
i still feel like
a
kid.
Ever
wonder 'bout that word?
together is it's name,
the sweetest sound
i've ever heard
it means we feel the
same.
Ever wonder
'bout that feeling?
deep inside of you,
that says as long
as we're alive
you'll be inside me
to.
Funny
how a phrase
can say the things
we long to hear,
take for instance
i love you
when whispered
in your
ear.
I
live my life
in love with you
and shall until
my
death,
to
tell you all
you mean to me
would take
an
alphabet.
Yet
as for now
these thirteen words
shall more than say it
all,
" were we to pass
this way again
once more for you,
i'd fall ".
Ben
myheartsvoice
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myheartsvoice
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Re: 13 Words . . . Ben
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by navydocny on
Tuesday, 11th November 2008 @ 02:01:11 PM AEST
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great concept!
great piece.....
Fantastic Poem!
Steve |
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Re: 13 Words . . . Ben
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by MaRyDoNtUwAnNa on
Tuesday, 11th November 2008 @ 02:05:59 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful poem I am glad that you have found someonet that makes you so happy and seems to be a muse for you |
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Re: 13 Words . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th November 2008 @ 07:49:01 PM AEST
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Wow Ben,
Simple words that say so much. deep
in feeling and emotion.
Great write..........Mike
Thx also for the comments. |
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Re: 13 Words . . . Ben
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 01:50:57 AM AEST
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Ah Ben my man,
you stroked the pages with love again. I always love this work you share with us.
hugs from puggles
Shall |
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Re: 13 Words . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 12:26:11 AM AEST
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it could not be said better, that hole in my soul gets filled when i read your love poetry,
hugs n' love nessa |
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