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CAN I?
Contributed by
robert_edgar_burns
on
Tuesday, 11th November 2008 @ 10:43:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Can I be your lover,
And also stay your friend?
I have no doubt about it.
I’ll love you till time ends!
I want a home some future day,
Filled with things that you find dear.
But the thing that I would cherish most,
Would be to know that you are there.
For I could live in a castle.
Or in a bamboo hut.
I’d buy you what you treasured.
But for me, you are enough!
So, can I be your lover?
I’ll forever stay your friend.
I want to be right by your side,
As we journey life hand in hand.
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robert_edgar_burns
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2008-11-11 10:43:07]
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Re: CAN I?
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 11th November 2008 @ 07:26:05 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, Rob... Did she say "Yes"?
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Re: CAN I?
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by 110277 on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 03:19:20 PM AEST
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it's so... shiny .))
really, it feels so bright, lightful and full of future
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