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Too Sad To Cry
Contributed by
outlawpoet
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Monday, 10th November 2008 @ 06:02:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Well she ran away and left me but I swear she never said a word
But she said it in the loudest voice I ever herd
She stole my car and broke my heart
But that don't bother me a bit
But she ran off with my only son
And she never should have done that s h i t
She cut through my cardiac like no one else before
She left me lying lonely and bleeding on the floor
The sooner I get over her the better ill get by
So im trading in my tears of sorrow
Cause im too sad to cry
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2008-11-10 18:02:01]
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Re: Too Sad To Cry
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by Desideratum on
Monday, 10th November 2008 @ 08:18:18 PM AEST
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| Painful. It hurts to be powerless. Keep expressing, I'll listen when I'm on here. |
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Re: Too Sad To Cry
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by iodinelove on
Tuesday, 11th November 2008 @ 01:16:35 AM AEST
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I like it; however, you may want to avoid bypassing the censors. Where as I disagree with it, and believe that all words should be seen, you're risking a deletion if one of the mods catch it.
Also, heard is spelled wrong. ^_^
Always, Abraham |
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Re: Too Sad To Cry
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by PreciousKitten on
Tuesday, 11th November 2008 @ 09:36:57 AM AEST
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| what does not kill you only makes you stronger. i could not let my child be taken from me. |
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Re: Too Sad To Cry
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 01:25:07 AM AEST
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Oh this is raw. Nicely written but so darn sad.
Hope things are better.
Again, awesome writing here my friend.
Hugs
Michelle |
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