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I Gave, You Took

Contributed by Butterflyperfect on Sunday, 9th November 2008 @ 03:15:57 PM in AEST
Topic: poets



I gave you my time
And you hogged it.

I gave you my thoughts
And you laughed.

I gave you my heart
And you broke it.

I gave you my soul
And you sold it to the devil.

I gave you my everything
And you took it.

Now all you left for me…
Is nothingness.




Copyright © Butterflyperfect ... [ 2008-11-09 15:15:57]
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Re: I Gave, You Took (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th November 2008 @ 02:51:04 AM AEST
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Wow, I can definitely relate.....kinda the been there done that thing. Short and uh, not so sweet. Nicely done. Sorry you have to write sad ones like this.

Take care,

Tim


Re: I Gave, You Took (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th November 2008 @ 07:32:55 AM AEST
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To love someone, is to give every
essence of your being. Unfortunately
there are those who only take, giving
nothing in return. You will find someone
who rivals your giving and your writes
will turn to beautiful pieces.
Nice write............Mike


Re: I Gave, You Took (User Rating: 1 )
by gmcse8 on Tuesday, 11th November 2008 @ 04:45:46 PM AEST
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REALLY NICE STRUCTURE. IT MADE ME WANT TO READ IT. NOW THAT IS WHAT I CALL POETRY.


Re: I Gave, You Took (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 04:57:59 PM AEST
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This is a great but really heart breaking poem. i hope you never had to suffer this!




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