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The First Cut Is Always The Deepest.
Contributed by
amber_vonHorror
on
Sunday, 9th November 2008 @ 04:41:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Baby didn't I tell you. The first cut is always the deepest.
But I promise angel. It hurts more and more.
When the scar tissue wraps tighter. Lick your lips in pleasure.
Oh you will.
Watching your skin rip off, is just the warmest pain
A pretty purple scar, our monetary gain.
Cherry flavoured blood. The surprises keep coming.
Don't tell me, this isn't better then your first orgasm.
And society will say. Stop it! Don't hurt yourself.
They'll try to lock you up. Straightjacket. Take away your trusty razorblade.
But don't listen, Angel. They're full of lives.
They won't care for you, like your friendly butcher knife.
Wear your scars with pride. But never let those people inside.
Never tell them our little secret.
When you cut that gash in your arm. Pain is shooting like a star
Happiness is really just a gash away.
And when you come home and feel like crying
Ignore the tears, and give your wrist a slicing
For everyone that's ever hurt you, it was always your fault
So what are you waiting for? Cover your cuts in some stinging salt
It's familiar. It's a blessing.
If only the world knew. How opening your veins can do so much for you.
Tasting the strawberry.
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amber_vonHorror
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Re: The First Cut Is Always The Deepest.
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by SilverRain on
Sunday, 9th November 2008 @ 10:16:11 AM AEST
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| Very interesting piece. Nicely written. Well done. |
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Re: The First Cut Is Always The Deepest.
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by The_Unknown on
Sunday, 9th November 2008 @ 12:26:37 PM AEST
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That's a interesting way to put it.
But I liked it. Good job.
-T_U |
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Re: The First Cut Is Always The Deepest.
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 02:12:55 AM AEST
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A most compelling piece of poetry,
the tittle wouldn't leave me alone,
so i read it, deffinately powerful in
it's conviction, well done strong
style you have . . .
Ben . . . |
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Re: The First Cut Is Always The Deepest.
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by Tiffyo4 on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 10:13:45 PM AEST
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| ver very nice. write. |
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Re: The First Cut Is Always The Deepest.
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by emmyb14 on
Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 06:11:01 PM AEST
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nice title,
i love that song.
haha |
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Re: The First Cut Is Always The Deepest.
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by emmyb14 on
Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 06:11:02 PM AEST
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nice title,
i love that song.
haha |
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