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Something goes wrong again
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 11:04:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I wake up
and
I'm sitting in a day room
everything is moving in slow motion
the medication makes me feel like I'm on a trip
the tv's on
but no one's watching it.
I watch the nurses
as they come and go
thier uniforms crack
and all the faces become a blur,
the radio's playing a song
and some the residents try to sing along.
Voices start whispering
there is something I am needing
I call out to the staff
hello hello
but no one is listening.
I think there is something wrong
strange things keep happening
CRASH BOOM
now I am making a racket
so hard to move
in this strait jacket,
the attendants are here
now I'm being restrained
strangely I feel relieved
I think I like pain.
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unknown_utopia
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2008-11-08 23:04:35]
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Re: Something goes wrong again
(User Rating: 1 )
by jesusofholland on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 11:19:52 PM AEST
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| Cool poem. I really like it. It brought me to "A Clockwork Orange", the book not the film. The medication, the jacket, I like it. |
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Re: Something goes wrong again
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 12:12:53 AM AEST
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excellent, chilling, so real,
hugs n' love nessa |
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