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SPLENDOR!
Contributed by
robert_edgar_burns
on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 10:28:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Today the sun came rising
Above the mountains high.
I watched in awe as I saw
The treetops touch the sky!
The ground with dew did glisten,
As sunbeams downward fell.
The sounds of morning filled the air
And set off mornings' smell.
The splendor of this visage,
Which I was blessed to see,
Caused me to sigh in wonderment,
From deep inside of me.
The vision was perfection.
It could not better be.
Unless of course you were here
To share this morn with me.
Mountains stand ten thousand years.
We're here just a few.
I want to spend each one of them,
Rising with the sun, and you!
By: Robert Edgar "Lawdog" Burns
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Re: SPLENDOR!
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 28th April 2010 @ 09:44:47 AM AEST
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Oh Robert your "SPLENDOR" is exactly that
"SPLENDID" and LOVERLY.........
I simply agree..........
Your heart is filled with song and dance, and I'm going to enjoy your splendid poems with every chance!
Warm love,
Lovingcritters
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Re: SPLENDOR!
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by fredmonte101 on
Tuesday, 26th August 2014 @ 11:31:56 AM AEST
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| Wow! Mr Burns that was excellent! Thank you. :) |
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