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The Depth of Darkness
Contributed by
SilverRain
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Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 02:13:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Madness and insanity
Separated by a mere pencil line
Erased and changed, moved
As they see fit
But the mind has no lines
Jumping between
feel and smell
to a depth of darkness
you cannot perceive
I know
I’ve been there
Copyright ©
SilverRain
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2008-11-08 14:13:21]
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Re: The Depth of Darkness
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by wizard on
Sunday, 9th November 2008 @ 11:23:17 AM AEST
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great post!
so much to be read here "between the lines"
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Re: The Depth of Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th November 2008 @ 01:00:43 AM AEST
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Wow, that is really good, in sort of an ambiguous way... at least to me. Don't get me wrong, I like it. It just may not have the same meaning to me as it does to you.
Definitely seems deep....again to me.
I think it is quite cleverly and brilliantly put together.
Take care and keep posting!!!
Tim
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