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My life without you
Contributed by
SilverRain
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Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 02:09:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Frozen from the inside
Heart chipped of stone
Eyes filled with emptiness
A void within my own
Gibbering insanity
Shouts within my mind
Veins spread with blackness
Every crevice it can find
My emptiness shows surface
In the shell left behind
My life without you
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SilverRain
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2008-11-08 14:09:17]
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Re: My life without you
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th November 2008 @ 12:46:47 AM AEST
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Hmmmm... I don't understand why there aren't any comments on this one yet but alas, I'm not always understanding.
I like it. It's a bit dark but I can totally relate to the message here. I've been there myself a time or twelve. The deep pit of sudden loneliness and despair.
I love that you really got the impact of the message across in such a short piece. Very well done and powerful.
Take care and if this is based on a facet of your life, the here and now, I hope things get better soon.
Tim |
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Re: My life without you
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 01:16:52 AM AEST
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sadly beautiful, a powerful poem,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: My life without you
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 01:17:04 AM AEST
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sadly beautiful, a powerful poem,
hugs n' love nessa |
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