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Woof!
Contributed by
Spike
on
Friday, 7th November 2008 @ 11:07:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Sometimes I want to crawl on all fours,
hands and feet like hairy paws
roll in the mud and dirt,
a world away from suit and shirt
Some nights I’ve got to HOOOWL at the moon,
or bellow in a crowded room
feel the blood pumping in my veins,
shirk off society’s chains
Like a lost boy I’ll COCK-A-DOODLE-DOO!!
I don’t care if it embarrasses you
climb a tree and monkey around,
scratch and pee down on the ground
Some days I’m want to spread my wings,
and fly to where a zephyr sings
to listen to the sparrows talk,
and fear the shadow of the hawk
One time I acted all these ways,
as a callow child on endless days
too long restrained in life’s cocoon,
I hope they will all break free soon!
AAOOOOH!
Copyright ©
Spike
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2008-11-07 23:07:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Woof!
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 12:34:11 AM AEST (User
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Woof!
AAOOOOH!
Good write.
luv it.
Huggs, smiles, AAOOOOH!,
emy
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Re: Woof!
(User Rating: 1 ) by zenith66 on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 01:00:49 AM AEST (User
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damn spike!! this is a truly remarkable write here man!!
such an amazing free spirited no holes barred journey of raw emotion, sometimes the contraints of society can be overwhelming and gettin gback to our animal instincts are the only thing to let out all that botled up anxiety and things and you have captured that with a purity and a skill of hand that i find captivating!!
great writing man!!!
keep it up!! |
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Re: Woof!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 05:55:02 AM AEST (User
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Yeah, go for it!!!! We all need to cut loose once and a whole lot of whiles!!! Hope you find the inner child and bark at the moon. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.
Tim
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Re: Woof!
(User Rating: 1 ) by SilverRain on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 03:06:55 PM AEST (User
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Hi there Spike
What a delightful piece - really enjoyed it! Don't we all sometimes feel that we just want to let go - and you did that extemely well here! Well done. |
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Re: Woof!
(User Rating: 1 ) by breezyweezy on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 07:15:10 PM AEST (User
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haha.
this just made my day, good write
breeze |
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