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MIRRORS OF THE SOUL!
Contributed by
Robert_Edgar_Burns
on
Friday, 7th November 2008 @ 10:54:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Reflecting light as if a mirror,
But twinkling as a distant star.
Deep shimmering pools of dark beauty,
With my image returning to me.
Entrancing and captivating while
Time halts in place and I’m lost
In an unknown dimension.
Heart pounding, blood pulsing
Sensations abounding as I long
To remain forever locked in the gaze
Of your breathtaking majestic brown eyes.
By: Robert Edgar "Lawdog" Burns
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Robert_Edgar_Burns
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2008-11-07 10:54:55]
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Re: MIRRORS OF THE SOUL!
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by tiggytom on
Friday, 7th November 2008 @ 10:59:34 AM AEST
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A nice and easy to read poem
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Re: MIRRORS OF THE SOUL!
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by navydocny on
Friday, 7th November 2008 @ 11:00:35 AM AEST
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The eyes have it...
Ideed, nothing more beautiful than when a woman that loves you gazes....
Great poem my friend...
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Re: MIRRORS OF THE SOUL!
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 7th November 2008 @ 05:01:42 PM AEST
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A vivid depiction, my friend...and yes, the EYES have it!
Jenni |
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Re: MIRRORS OF THE SOUL!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 09:57:11 PM AEST
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| Very profound and the imagery was quite captivating! |
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