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Drowning Without A Plan
Contributed by
Crimsonflame
on
Thursday, 6th November 2008 @ 07:02:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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There is beauty in the breakdown,
There is bittersweet glory in the abyss,
Buried six feet underground,
Oh, where is the bliss?
A wanderer at a loss,
Questioning all she ever believed,
Counting the distance she had crossed,
Longing for the people she had grieved.
A long, endless drought,
Stretching across an empty, barren land,
She can't help her darkened thoughts,
Feeling stillness in her cold hand.
All alone in a desert with the cruel sand,
Waiting for help to come,
Drowning, drowning without a plan,
With nothing left but kingdom come
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Crimsonflame
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2008-11-06 07:02:01]
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Re: Drowning Without A Plan
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by outlawpoet on
Thursday, 6th November 2008 @ 02:34:11 PM AEST
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| kind of a rough read at the end using the same words to rhyme breaking away from the scheme but you used good metaphores |
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Re: Drowning Without A Plan
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by callme_spart on
Thursday, 20th November 2008 @ 03:20:38 AM AEST
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| truly sad and beautiful |
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