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Teardrops in an outlaws eyes
Contributed by
outlawpoet
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Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 04:23:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Well i herd someone say that outlaws don't cry
But tonight darlin i feel like i could die
I'm 500 miles from where i want to be
500 miles from where love was last seen
I have hurt everyone that i have ever known
And been hit by every bouler i've ever thrown
I took most things that just weren't for takin
And tried to force a love that wasn't for makin
I stare at the walls just to pass away the time
I think of the old days to pacify my mind
Livin this life and my outlaw ways
Have paved the path for lonely nights and days
Now this just aint my regular poetry session
And i dont want anyone gettin the wrong impression
That maybe im soft
But maybe, some outlaws do cry baby
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2008-11-05 16:23:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Teardrops in an outlaws eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Voice of the Silent on
Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 05:13:00 PM AEST (User
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Great poem
No ones soft sometimes people just have to cry weather they want to or not
said that your so far away from the one you love
hope everything turns out well
keep writing
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Re: Teardrops in an outlaws eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by karoody on
Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 05:39:20 PM AEST (User
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I was sincerely touched by this write
It reminds the reader that there is more
People judge to quickly, profile people
As far as you...I hope that things look up for you soon. I hate knowing you are hurting...
I wish these words helped
Hugs Love Blessings Smiles
Kara |
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Re: Teardrops in an outlaws eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 06:29:45 PM AEST (User
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i really liked this poem.
It truly touched me.
This is an amazingly well written piece.
Nice Work!
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Teardrops in an outlaws eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 08:48:25 PM AEST (User
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A man can never be a Real Man until he learns
to cry. Jesus Wept! He was a Man's Man!
Blessings,
Robert Edgar "Lawdog" Burns |
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Re: Teardrops in an outlaws eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Butterflyperfect on
Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 10:50:41 PM AEST (User
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Just want to say how beautiful this piece is. Great Job. Good Luck to you in all that you do.
-Butterfly |
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Re: Teardrops in an outlaws eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Butterflyperfect on
Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 10:50:47 PM AEST (User
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Just want to say how beautiful this piece is. Great Job. Good Luck to you in all that you do.
-Butterfly |
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