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Little Ms.Perfect
Contributed by
MsCommunicati0n
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Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 04:43:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Little Ms.Perfect...always did what she was told,
Never broke a promise...had a heart of gold,
Woke up every morning... A smile so bright it could blind,
A heart that never spoke ..was mourning....yet she looked so refined,
Day to day she put up a front...as if nothing were the matter,
But deep inside...everytime she saw the mirrors reflection...she wished it would shatter,
Her perfect legs to her were just ugly,
Her slim waste in her mind was too chunky,
Every meal she ate....would come up soon after,
Then tears of regret...while covering them up with some fake laughter,
Her mother never suspected, her friends never knew,
So self rejected...nausiated by every chew,
The days grew old...her body grew thin,
The nights were cold..from the agony within,
Laying in her bed...shaking with hunger,
Wishing mommy could make it all better...like it was when she was younger,
When she was Little Ms.Perfect...
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Re: Little Ms.Perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by outlawpoet on
Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 04:47:33 PM AEST (User
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good write i liked the honesty in this |
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Re: Little Ms.Perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by navydocny on
Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 11:39:24 AM AEST (User
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We are so very impressionable when we are young. Especially vulnerable if not heeded or watched closely...
A very nice, but painful read...
Take care
Steve |
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Re: Little Ms.Perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 12:00:28 PM AEST (User
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Very heartbreaking poem...well written.... I think this is one of a parent's worst nightmare.....
Jenni |
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Re: Little Ms.Perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by tinkbaby101 on
Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 02:22:03 PM AEST (User
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nice write its true we look at ourselfs different when we grow older |
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