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Untitled
Contributed by
tinkbaby101
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Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 02:14:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I want to know what happened
I want to know what I did
I'm still hurting
I'm still crying
I want to know why you left
I want to know why you didn't see the hurt in my eyes
You told me it was over, that we should just be friends
I put on a face and said ok
You stood there for a few moments just looking at me
I didn't acknowledge what you said or that you were still there
You said you had to leave and ok was all I said
You had the guts to hug me after all you said
You left me standing there and I just cried
I've cried for so long and now its been too long
You made me cry
Then I find out you just ran your mouth
Ran your mouth to your friends...
Your friends had me crying, yet you didn't know why
Well, I'm done...I'm done, its been too long..
Too long have I waited
Too long have I cried
You weren't worth it
You weren't worth the tears
If you came back to tell me your sorry
I wouldn't listen, remember you broke my heart
I wouldn't listen but yet I'd let you talk
Then it would be my turn
I'd have just one thing to say
"If you wanted me so bad....
Why did you walk away?"
That's all I'd say and then just like you
I'd just walk away.
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2008-11-04 14:14:43]
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Re: Untitled
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by outlawpoet on
Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 02:17:41 PM AEST
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| this is a very strong write it takes a lot to put out raw emotions poetry should be pure and raw and thats what this is good write |
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Re: Untitled
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by Butterflyperfect on
Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 04:05:08 PM AEST
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You know I love you... Take care of yourself and keep writing. I know you have more wonderful words in you. Go Tink!
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Re: Untitled
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by 143 on
Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 07:56:47 PM AEST
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Tink, I've personally been in your shoes!
I felt every single line that you written here.
That was deep and very hard to write I bet?
You inspire me ...
GREAT JOB!!!
143
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