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Sword of Love
Contributed by
Recyclebin
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Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 05:51:06 AM in AEST
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Stainless steel
perfect firmness
the creator forge's,
hammering in form comes trust.
Dripping molten lava
Smoldering blacken purity
become's unbending faith
illumination twisted,
tenderness reflecting
Drawing-out,
wielded is unflawed creation.
The edge knifelike sharp,
but tang is of the other side.
Guard set , for protection
of its sharpness contrast.
Pommel secured, so guardian
can thrust authority through
Tempered is this Steel, so use wisely
for it is the sword of love...
Copyright ©
Recyclebin
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2008-11-04 05:51:06]
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Re: Sword of Love
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by outlawpoet on
Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 07:12:03 AM AEST
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| takin a break huh? well nice write |
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Re: Sword of Love
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 01:52:22 PM AEST
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A lovely poem to leave us with but I hope you won't be gone for too long, Bin....I will miss you for sure....
Hugs
Miss Jenni |
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Re: Sword of Love
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 04:00:10 PM AEST
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Wonderfully written
love the message
i will most certainly miss your work
I hope you don't completely disappear
take care..
hugs love smiles blessings
kara
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Re: Sword of Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 06:40:59 AM AEST
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Great write Bin,
Gotta love the metaphors. Hope to see
you back soon.
Mike |
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