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Girl in the Window
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 10:54:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Alone I walk past windows and walls
Until one window draws me in
There’s a sad young girl all by herself
She looks so familiar, with her fake little grin
I asked her why she seemed so sad
But she just mocked the things I said
I asked her not to do that
And my anger seemed to spread
She then told me I was worthless
And that I had no right to live
Then she told me I was a fool
And that I had nothing left to give
I asked her why she said these things
She said because it’s true
I stood there and I began to cry
But then she did too
I asked her why she was crying
She told me she was blue
So once again I asked her why
And she said “because I’m you”
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CrimsonTears
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2008-11-03 22:54:16]
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Re: Girl in the Window
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by Recyclebin on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 11:12:07 PM AEST
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That is an awesome write Crimson, stunning.
~Bin~ Bows
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Re: Girl in the Window
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 12:12:47 AM AEST
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Dance on 'cause u have created a masterpeice here.
Awesome wisdom in these words.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Girl in the Window
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by alexischeyenne on
Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 07:08:18 AM AEST
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Wow, I love that.
Great write (: |
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Re: Girl in the Window
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 02:33:06 PM AEST
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Wow...
This is like some kind of nightmare...
I loved it, Very creative! I agree with Emy
But it is so devastating...
I honestly had to collect myself before I could comment...
Hugs Smiles Blessings
Kara |
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Re: Girl in the Window
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 06:54:52 AM AEST
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Very good write though I did see the ending
coming about half way through.
Still an enjoyable read........Mike |
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