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My problem is that I don't know what I want
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 06:04:48 PM in AEST
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I owe this to karoody. It just came to me in the middle of our conversation
our conversation sometimes gives me thought for a lot of my poems so I say thanks
My problem is that I don't know what I want
It just never comes in daily thought
Dreams of travel and exploration
I want to travel before my expiration
but I have things to do first
I don't know what to do
I just don't ever think it through
I have other things that are more important
but my problem is I don't know what I want
It just never comes to me in daily thought
what to do
if I where you
what would my dream be
If you could be me
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Voice of the Silent
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2008-11-03 18:04:48]
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Re: My problem is that I don't know what I want
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by karoody on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 06:31:28 PM AEST
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Kelly~
This made me smile
there is always time to dream big and search the soul
You will figure out what it is one day...
I'll tell you though,
I'm not so sure as I sit here that anything is more important than the dreams...
Perhaps loving people and being loved in turn
Love Smiles and huge hugs always...
Kara |
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Re: My problem is that I don't know what I want
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 06:38:54 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem. I can relate because i too don't know what i want out of life. Great Job! |
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Re: My problem is that I don't know what I want
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by Butterflyperfect on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 09:01:00 PM AEST
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I like this more for the reason that it is so real and understandable.
I totally get what you are saying. Great Job!
-Butterfly |
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Re: My problem is that I don't know what I want
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by katiejon on
Thursday, 28th February 2013 @ 03:00:57 PM AEST
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| Good |
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